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Slender are the scars that bind,
That haunt my body and fragile mind.
They keep me here in this odd place,
And remind me that I fell from grace.
No matter who I choose to be,
They will always be a part of me.
Without them,
I would be quite lost.
I need them,
Never mind the cost.
If only I knew what they were for,
And didn't endlessly thirst for more.
Scars so slender,
And so pale,
Raised on skin,
You never fail
To excite my darker dreams.
All I need is found within,
And placed upon unoffending skin.
A part of me they shall always stay,
Until my flesh has gone away.
Scars so pretty,
Let me see
Who I was and shall be.
A rhyming poem about my scars. I really would be lost without them...
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
That was really amazing!! Wonderful job! This made me prove that scars show the real me ;)
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AmnesiaRose Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!:D
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
Welcome ;)
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Jaz305 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
So beautiful!
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AmnesiaRose Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!:D
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Jaz305 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
I fear my scars.
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AmnesiaRose Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry... to me, my scars are an integral part of who I am, so I'm not sure I understand how you feel...
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Hah, A friend just linked this to me.. a friend who also just commented on this. It is beautiful, and I'm going to link it on to other people.
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AmnesiaRose Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow! Thanks!:D
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Bhabayagga Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
...the girl I'm in love with also enjoys cutting herself. So I guess I can connect. Very well written and excellent rhyming! Definitely my favorite! :aww:
(I've got some scars too, by the way.)
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